In a moment

by damus
and i could do nothing at this point to change her opinion of me in her rock and tumble world i'm as steady as the sea and when there's no time for us to kill and when the world stops spinnin still we'll see we needed one more thing to let us finally break free but as of now we hold on to wrong and right and still some how we keep our memories through this cold dark night and as of now yeah right this minute everything this illusion we maintain to keep our hearts from breaking free is breaking me. for years its just been you and I and i couldnt be happier that way and the roads we're going down grew even closer every day but when you're sitting in my car and the sky is growing dim the last few weeks i'm learning slowly that the journey's gonna end but as of now we hold on to wrong and right and still some how we keep our memories through this cold dark night and as of now yeah right this minute one last thing this illusion we maintain to keep our hearts from breaking free it's breaking me.
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Do you write all of your own poetry? It's very beautiful - and original. A seldom thing in this world.
What you have you here are very good song lyrics. I like the firs stanza best; it's the most lyrical, as well as being the most clear. I don't think it's smooth enough for spoken poetry, but like I said, great song lyrics. Were you strumming on a six string?

PS- I'm always here to read you, Jack B. Nibmle.
My attempt at insight - It seems that you are more inspired when just musing than when you actually have a muse. It's nice to see you focus more on the idea than the subject at hand. I like this one very much. Keep it up.