Sitting down after work so much easier with you
talking not of the day but of the night
and how it seems to be new
and tends to be ours
back and forth I go on emotions
and back and forth you follow me
wish I could thank you for all that you've done
my heart you have won
all of these thoughts that i keep hidden
the ones of you i let fly free
i'm never sure they work to potential
i'm never sure they came from me
stop rhyme, stop love, stop everything
this poem is different because it isnt a song
just an oddly timed letter
that i never send
one i'm constantly writing but you've never read.
and back and forth you follow me"
I like this. It gives the poem movement; almost made me want to bob my head.
I liked the ending, too.
Speak out, Huck! I'm always searching for your little poetic secrecies!
Your turn.