crappy poem

this is a crappy poem. but i need people to tell me what they think. or if they have any suggestions. so please help! Image hosted by Photobucket.com You said people always called you Inuyasha You used to call me Kagome What happened to those days? Did they all fade away? We would talk each night And I would always know things were right You could always make my troubles Go away I listened to your pains I listened to your fears I listened to all your problems And listened to your tears There was never much I could do But give my comfort to you No matter what the outcome was With those that you would choose I was always there for you Even when you would lose I tried to show you the brighter side So you wouldn’t have to hide But now it almost seems you don’t need me You’ve found that other one She’s stolen my identity And my friend, the one who was always there But now he hardly is He doesn’t need me anymore And then that makes me think Does anyone else? Or did they ever? Image hosted by Photobucket.com
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ya. that sucks
heya girl..

yeha i know.. hehe i think he seen the entry titals on my other diary..and put somthing about them on his.

He sent me a text the day after and asked if he could have a week to think about it... and i was like no.. i don't want you back.. but couldn't text him as i had no credit.

But yey!!

yeha i hope i get them done too.. and tbh i don't care about the pain... as i like it. But i'm sure they'll look cool :d.

How're you?
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I like and write poems too. could you do me a favor and read one of mine and tell ME waht you THINK. go to lillithrysa's diary and read hate or laughing at lies.