My life is nothing short of I Love You

The gentle breeze soothes through the open balcony window and onto our naked bodies, with the sun softly dawning through the voile curtains. I wake to your kiss and fresh body caressing mine. The day has begun with my heart alive to your beauty and awaits the passion to be shared with you in the new day yearning to see our love. Breakfast decides to be eaten in bed as the breakfast table is just too dull a place for us to have fun while guessing to each other how we will choose for the day to unfold, but I whisper to her with a soft smile, “as long as the day unfolds with you in my arms, my love is content”. I’ve never seen a slice of toast eaten in such a delicate and loveable way – it’s the small things adored that mean the most. We bathe each other and dress each other; I watch her as she plays with her make up; she then offers to do mine for me; the cheek, the laugh, the kiss, the love. Now out in the midst of the day, her illustrious figure gives appeal to the white floral dress waving on her body as we hold hands along the pathway in the tranquil park. She runs to a spot on the grass and playfully falls down; me following behind, I fall on to her - my lips catch her lips as I do. We roll around for the grass to envy her dress and the sky to catch a glimpse of the joy that the day is giving her. Each kiss to which I give another, each word to which I speak one more. We lay like two angels in the sky, hands still held, pondering to ourselves – which to myself would be what the future holds – I find it holds the moment I look to my right to allow the edge of my lips to pass on to her “I love you” – a kiss given for each word. We dine the end of the day in a romantic restaurant, a candlelit table, famished and awaiting each others desired cuisine. I can’t help but compliment her on the red rose coloured dress she has worn. Her hair flows sexily to the left of her neck leaving her neckline almost naked to the observing eye. A woman likes to be kissed on the neck; it’s one of those places on a woman’s body, but have you ever wondered what it’s like for a man when he kisses a woman there - "who cares" you might say in a seduced tone. A man can breathe in her scent as if it were her whole life; he can taste the tenderness of her body and he can feel the path to which he would leave a trail of kisses from her neck, along to her inner shoulder and through to the rest of her sumptuous body. Seated there her eyes have already seen my eyes gazing, and barely had we begun dining. It had been raining that night so we caught a taxi home but stopped a corner before our intended stop. We ran the rest of the way in the rain covering ourselves with what little that we could. Embarking on up the stairs to our apartment we couldn’t but help share a kiss on each step until we reached our door. It hadn’t taken us long to fall out of our clothes and into each others arms, our naked bodies caressing like the dawn that same day, but such was our trend when living life, when living in love. This time it was in front of the charmed fire. A rug on the floor and a sheet for cover. “I love that I love you” I softly say to her; “I love that you love me” she softly says back. We fall asleep to the warmth of the fire and the trickles of rain tapping on the window.
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This made me smile
Why hello there. My day has been superb. Yours? Hows the exams going? And, this piece of writing.. it is just utter perfection.
Wonderful what love can do. *sigh*

Amazing writing Mister Jose :]
yup, i think you almost got me all figured out i think and i am keeping cheerful! thank you so much kind of made me realize that maybe i should just stand back and live without thinking,to be so self-conscious, for a while. move with the flow of things and accept them as they are. not everything is meant to be changed or altered and i think im still trying to cope with the thought. It's just that I love helping people even if it seems impossible!
on a side note...I love your entry! it's so well written i wish i had that talent in writting. while reading it, the feelings felt so sincere and real, which makes you a great writer!
Yes, i did write it =) glad you liked it =) Thats a good thing about your exams.. Nice to have a little break!! Hope everything is well. Keep cheerful -- bx
aww thanks for your many comments. it sure is beautiful writting about love. it seems that when its written in true sincerity it can never be bad and thx for the compliment on my entry, very sweet. but i believe i still got a long way to go in orgder to get at least half of what i want to come accross; that's why im surprised that you actually understand my entries. i am a pretty confusing person..lol so its an accomplishment.
however, i dont think im a saint because i put people before myself, i do have many faults. one of them being overanalysing myself. from waht you've said i should continue to try to ameliorate how i see myself by any means possible but in the process i shouldnt lose myself. we all question ourselves but that doesnt mean that we are weak or failure to life. it's those questions that makes us grow so that we can reach higher ground...
in understanding ourselves. the confusion that comes along with it is a price we must pay i guess. all i can do is accept myself and be happ with whom i am, right? i wish it was that say for me...i think its because i dont know from whre to base this happiness. i can't be happy just because when everything around me isnt very cheerful. my life, right now, is just hard and complicated and i can't really deal with it for now.
i do keep cheerful...(btw; this expression just brings a smile, all the time!) because otherwise i would go crazy! but i think i will take your advice and put myself first and see where it takes me! i mean i cant bring sunshine to everyone else because their world is gray while mine continues to become darker! and i should deal with my issues firstly and maybe it wouldnt seem so impossible! what can i say?! im a great friend..(i am not conceited)
lol im sorry for rambling on ur page but simply talking about it just seem to make things a bit more clearer on my side and i just thought its okay! to think that it all started from my fears...
i dont think i know i know them but now at least i know that they can't keep me back! and its all thx to you!
i glad you liked my last entry...lol but maybe you are right maybe he's not very different from others. it was inspired by this guy at school who did that to my friend but i dont think he was trying to be mean... being nervous makes people act like jerks! in another iew perhaps she misinterpreted his response; it surely wouldnt be the first time it happened to everyone! from that afterthought, what kind of person do you think she is?
Wow, so...I love it. I absolutely love it. I love the way you made this couple a mystery to the reader - we don't know who they are or anything about them except of their love for each other which apparently means more to them than anything else in the world. It's so sweet and beautiful. UGH, you wanted criticism...but I can't think of anything!! The words flow perfectly...and so does the story. I just don't have anything bad to say...hmm...