Finally, a new poem!!
Buuuuut, i'm lost for a title. Any ideas would be greatly apreciated. All critisism will be welcomed, too.
And so, here is the poem i wrote last night, at midnight, when i couldn't sleep:
Unnamed
I want you
I need you
I lay in restless wait
For the time you come to realise
My love knows no bounds.
As time goes by,
I wait
For the few precious moments,
Where we are alone,
That, in waiting, makes you mine.
My gaze falls to the clocks
Our time together draws to an end
And the forever question that comes too.
hot to end the perfect night, and return to the darkness?
With a hug, a kind word, and a goodbye?
Or with a lone kiss that says it all:
"I love you"?
I leave with a goodbye, without the courage to show how i feel
But as time draws on
The lonely regret builds
And the promise that next time, i will prove my love
Forever lingering in the empty air.
But the time never comes
And I keep it hidden another day
Forever promising
Tomorrow.
But as the times roll on
The forever promise of Tomorrow
Is never satisfied.
The times change
And as we age we are drawn apart
Fate brings us together again
But the forever promise is never satisfied.
Long years pass
And as you die
A tear is shed
Many years have passed
And contact was long ago broken
But the love always remained.
Time changed our paths,
Forgetting our past
And the final meeting
Held in store
A brief hug, and a quick goodbye.
Time passes once more
Bringing regret,
And death, at my own hands.
The forever promise,
To be broken, in the afterlife.
call the peom "time"... that's all i could think of
i like your poem
or
ill toast to tht
there both aol sns