hey can someone tell me if thiz iz a good poem i wrote it thiz morn... you should knw you saw when i fell i can see through to the truth you dwell are you not getting it? time and time again... i already told you hello, arent we friendz? when you say one thing and you mean another i knw what youre doing ive mastered the bluffer you need buy some bulletz cuz youre only a gun but wherez the target therz no fun! youre like a secret tht you cant keep slowly being busted you stutter to speak if you dont continue to hide would you still says itz hard? you can only be yourself hell, let down your guard just let me knw now why you cant tell me anything cuz im the most understanding person not really that intimidating share your deepest most inner thoughtz im trying to reach you but in your web im caught do you want me here? these timez getting old are you going to undress from those layerz of the cold? when never is forever dont leave your wordz unspoken til the sun becomes the moon it wont turn the world unbroken plz do not steal it and coment on wht u think thnkz ~TRISH~