#23

Feeling: old
Shes got the coldest of hearts but its not her fault because her parents decieved her and said they didnt need her they locked her up in her own mental jail her thoughts were plainly pale but she trys to ack happy you can see shes been hurt her life has spoiled and has been treated like dirt the neighbors hear glass shatter as they yell and curse and the girl has bruises on her face who has it worse her parents hate eachother she cant afford meals from school and shees as light as a feather as her dad comes home staggering and stale breath stale of beer and her mother with cigarettes in each pocket the gurl runs to her room locks the door and cries ongoing tears she bottled up her feelings as a frierce,black range you cant tell shes been hurt shes even makes straight A's shes so young and both parents are dead her mom hung in the closet and her dad on the floor with a bullet in his head and a girl with nothin unsaid
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hey......ur poems r deep they scare me sum but they r really good
that one was really sad but liked it..good job
Your poems are awesome! I suggest that you submit them in a few contests if you havent already.