#12

by tomorrowstrish
Feeling: alone
Broken and torn inside what to do next I cant decide I sit trying to think of what to say Ive run out words I sit in silence A tear in my eye for the past thinking of when I smiled last The only word I can think of is sorry Sorry for wordz Ive spoke for wordz Ive written And for finding me and finding my voice I never should have spoken up I should have never woken up I should have stayed in the dark should have stayed in the background I should I stayed invisible I should have stayed stupid I should have never grown a heart and started to care Wht ever words I write wht ever I try to say Whatever letters I see on the screen they just dont seem right I fought a gallant battle and failed I tried to right my wrongz and failed I tried to mend myself but ended up broken At the time my mind made sense Now I dont know what happened or what I should do All I know is Im broken plzz coment i tryde my bezt to keep my z'z and worlds the right way
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good poem
cute poem! i think lots feel that way..i used to..but then i found out that feeling broken wont help you...just stand up for yourself and try to keep it strong..
rock on! life is waiting for ya! hehe
I thought u were writing part of my life story.
I meant that's sort of how I feel when my depression kicks in
Why do you replace s's with z's?
hey i like ur poem.... leave a comment on my new entry... cya
Your poems are really well done. Have you every tried to publish anything? Have a good day!
-maggie
hey i really liek your poems..i try to write but im not that good..my diary is dumbblonde4u..plz comment
[Anonymous]
this is the best so far I think you have a lot of talent and you need to keep writting I love this I have a simulare on
good poem

danielle(coment me)
Very nice. I feel the same way..only without the z's. I'm not too fon d of them but if they're your style go for it. Very nice poem though. The content was wodnerful
Be weary of criticism hun.
Although you ultimately want your message to stand out, your style (which ever aspect it may be) is what makes it yours. The trick is to find which part(s) of your style enhances, not deteriorates your work. Keep plugging away at it though, your young still, so beating yourself up won't get you anywhere.
Be weary of criticism hun.
Although you ultimately want your message to stand out, your style (which ever aspect it may be) is what makes it yours. The trick is to find which part(s) of your style enhances, not deteriorates your work. Keep plugging away at it though, your young still, so beating yourself up won't get you anywhere.