Listening to: The Used -All tht ive got
Feeling: lousy
To whom it may concern
Red is pretty
So is blue
I didnt know which to use to write to you
My life was short
And now my spirit is free
I cut myself loose
from my misery
I was lonely and hurt too
I didnt know who to turn to
Have a little faith they say
But faith didnt go a long way
I was confused and didn't understand
I just wanted someone to hold my hand
To help me through my rough times
To stop me from committing such a crime
My wasted youth is now gone.
But there are others who are not strong
So please look and see
That theyll need help just like me
coment plzz
peace,
rawt
Sophie
*gives you props*
GOOD! :)
[luvablelushh]
the poem is weak. there's no structure. very cliche content. weak analogies. sometimes that works, but not here. it's like a sad-sorry-emo poem on crack.
you're just like everybody else.