#17

Listening to: Ever Clear- Rock Star
Feeling: active
She went to the Bday party and had lots of fun but before she knew it her life was done She was offered a drink and she said sure not really thinking about what would happen to her As she was driving home in her car she didnt see the truck coming from a far Well now its all over her life is in the past She was only 15 she died so fast Her family will really miss her but they know shes not very far shez right up in heaven shining from under her star Shes watching over them night and day making sure that theyll be OK I see her standing there alone and depressed What happened to this girl to make her life so messed She thinks about suicide its always on her mind Why is her happiness so hard to find Sitting on the table she sees a gun with just one shot her life would be done She picks it up and puts it to her head with in a second she was dead Her family and friends sit home and cry They loved her so much why did she have to die? They thought she was happy they had no clue They couldve helped her if they only knew Now as she sits there watching from above she never knew she had so much love She looking down from up in the sky wishing so much tht she didnt die She wants to go back she wants to see if she hadnt killed herself how her life would be This is what happens lives get taken away People feel that the just cant make it through another day So when you have a bad day and problems get you down talk to someone try to be happy and most of all never frown coment plzz <3
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i like it
awesome writter
[Anonymous]
i hope it's ok that i added u to my friend's list
[Anonymous]
w0w that was rlly go0d!!
i lved it !
x3 LauRa
Um not my kind of poem subject matter but good i guess. You seem alittle desperate for attention if you ask me. But i guess my opinion is shit to you as it is to everyone else.
Hahaha hey.. You randomly commented me and i think thats cool, but was it only for your poems. By the way they are very good. Keep writing.. Youll get way better
No problem
yesss of course what do you neeed?


JESS x3
[Anonymous]
wow i loved it! u have serious talent
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LIAM
i read a few more awesum! keep it up they r great
ur layout and everything is real cute.. good job.
cool poem... read mine about umpa lumpas
hey can u check out my new poem comment plz
hey you are good will ya check out mine comments welcome plz
--morgan
hey ur poems r gr8! check out the one on mine now plz! comments welcome
Hey thanxs, wicked diary, oh and I'm loving the poem... so keep on rocking people's socks.
Great Poem!