so i did up my poem real quicky quicky. it's really sucky. because... i did it quick. but i don't care. any suggestions? please? Remembrance is: The people who fought for us Gun and bullets, trenches dug deep Battle scars and peace treaties Germany Britain France The cool fall morning the sun on my face Going to school making such haste The blood that flows through my veins The lives of those who couldn’t be saved It is the guilt, the shame The bloodshed and operations The tears we cried The memories we will never forget The look of terror upon the faces It is our freedom Of speech, of religion, of race Most of all, it is the freedom we feel as a country The independence we have sought, have attained The lives of those who we’ll never forget We are deeply, truly in your debt And on this day We remember