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12:36 PM I should really be paying attention in this class right now, but I'm finished all my work so meh. I'm not supposed to be on the internet either, but meh. lol. Wrote two songs today, and kicked the crap out of my writer's block. I'll post them later though, because I really don't have the time, and the teach keeps making rounds to see if we're on the internet or not. So yeah. I'm bored. I have nothing to do. 9:06 PM Well, not much has changed since I updated before. I'm still bored and I'm still sitting around with nothing to do, only I'm at home now, which is good. Last period spare because Mr Murray was away with the R.O.M. trip, so Andrew and I hung out for a while. But yeah. That's the most exciting thing that's happened all day. Songs from this morning: My Sweet Serenity Walking these streets Late at night all alone. Ain't got no one, And nowhere to call my own. Pushed almost to the Point of no return, Hit me again, I'll see that you burn. Searching the darkness, Seeking the light. I dropped to my knees, And I saw a sight. Of a beautiful girl With dark hair and dark eyes. She took my hand, Took my by surprise. She took my hand and we Left real far. Driving for days in a Run down old car. We lived our lives in Perpetual bliss. I never once thought I'd be as happy as this. My sweet serenity, You're all I want, You're all I need. My sweet serenity, You're all I want, You're all I see. I love you will all of my heart, I'll never let you down. I'll always be there, And I'll never make you frown. My sweet serenity... Ashes of Eden Perfect world, Gifted to the human race. Beautiful world, Gem on the backdrop of space. But then that all changed By human hatred, Open your mouth, Taste the cold steel of death. Fires are burning All across this world. The fate of you all Shall soon unfurl... And you'll taste the ashes of eden. Emotionless tyrant, Powerful by the wars we wage. Using nukes, Killing those we ought to save. But nothing has changed, 'Cause we won't stand strong. We must band together And show him he's wrong. Fires are burning All across this world. The fate of you all Shall soon unfurl... And you'll taste the ashes of eden. I'd really like to know what you think. It'd be nice to get some constructive critisism. I don't even think I spelt that right.
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it's spelled criticism. the first song is way too sappy, even for a love song. the second one is good.
aww i really like the first one. its cute. and different. i dont think i've ever seen u write a love thingy, so its a change. keep it.
I really love them both, you need to repeat some things in the second one, i think you if you expand on the eden one it will be great, but hey, thats me.