[*4*] Empty, a poem

sry i havn't been on in awhile. i luv writing!!- here's a poem i made up by myself ____________________________________________ My life The earth going around the sun Causes the light to rise and set I awake when it is dim And sit in bed until time seems to stop I think about how today will go Or how yesterday went I think about my mistakes And my achievements The scale tips My day I rush to a place Bearing physical and mental weights Voices and ideas overlap I cannot master life Until I learn to find myself Among the others that are Echoing… Just repeating… As I fall deep into the abyss My mind The thoughts others think Seem to push my own away My mouth is no longer mine But instead another’s It lasts all day Until I reach my sanctuary Where I can filter out myself From all the filth I picked up today But something is not right… My pain The depression is overwhelming The sadness has no end The loneliness has no equal I have always felt this way Ever since I had learned to think To meditate, to learn, to be tempted And to want And to speak with my own voice I am still empty And I always will be...
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thats so good did you write it?? well i made m the entry to you can read it if you want =)
Hey wassup? Thanks for the comment. I'm not really sure how changed my layout though. But anyway...thats a very cool poem. I write poetry too. I have one that is copyrighted and published in "The International Poets Society". You should try for that too. You seem like a talented person. The easiest way to do that is go to poetry.com. Its pretty cool. I think I just might post that poem if you'd like to read it. But anyway, I 'll check in later k?
that is a good one right there keep on writing. laters
I can do a cartwheel a round off n thats it i really can't do anything else. Hope u had a really great birthday.

Kaylee