song

Feeling: accomplished
weelllll. my sister decided she wanted 2 rite a song. she is good at music so she is riting the tune, but i hav 2 rite the words. so i hav but seein asd i cannae put the tune on here, i shal put it in n y'al can read it lke a poem. pleas tel me wot u think see me here im crying, screaming, losing myself all for you i cry your tears i feel your pain only to remind me of how ive failed wen u break i break every cut you force, every tear that falls im drowning in your pain wish i could shut my eyes and free you from it all but still you hurt still you bleed but still i stay you dont see how youre hurting, killing, losing me as you fall i hate what you do i fear all you are i havent saved you and never will cos wen u break i break every cut you force, every tear that falls im drowning in your pain wish i could shut my eyes and free you from it all but still you hurt still you bleed but still i stay im drowning im dying im crying for you im screaming im bleeding im hurting and still i stay xHUGx
Read 16 comments
hey, sorry, i just saw your post and thought how the lyrics are!!! well done =)
the lyrics are realy good
xxx
[Anonymous]
That's really... Ok, I was going to say 'nice' but that's pathetic. I don't know what to say.

It's good that you managed to decorate your room.
Glad you have a cool room even if I don't.
[Anonymous]
Is the song about what I think it is?
i love that song! good choice!
It's got a black carpet which I love but the walls are whitey-cream because my mum said the room would be too dark.
[Anonymous]
Sorry about that.

I'm still trying to persuade her but I only had it done about 2 months ago.
[Anonymous]
I only have one parent to persuade and still I can't have my rooms painted dark.

In my dad's house I have a navy carpet, but only because it used to be a junk room.
[Anonymous]
thats really good!
[Anonymous]
wow, those are awesome lyrics!
[Anonymous]
you dont need to be sorry for anything. Its all my own doing and i have to deal with that myself.
I just need some time away from this place, these people and be left with just my thoughts. It feels like im dying, or that im already dead. There is no point in trying to do nice things for myself until im ready to appreciate them, untill ive sorted my head out.

*sighs*
i love you too.
im sorry.
but i cant concerntrate on sorting myself out with people around me... i just need to go somewhere completely alone where i can be anonymous and where i dont feel obliged to do anything for other people, or for any reason.
i know im not making sense. its just hard to put this into words.
dont worry about it. theres nothing anyone can do, ive realised that now which i think has something to do with me not being able to talk properly. whats the point in talking to people if there's nothing they can do? ive stopped relying on people, i think ive reached the point of no return.
i know you mean well and everything. but what if it doesnt get better? how can you be so sure i'll work things out. thinsg may not get worse, but they may not improve either. bah, im such a pessimist lately.

im sorry.
i think i have to go soon, mother will be getting home. i just wanna go curl up and cry in a corner somewhere. i feel terrible.
i really like it^_^ congrats..