still falling

still falling -7:52pm Falling tears all around me Laughter shouts and im lonely Voices echo the dawning Dew escapes and leaves the morning I'm still falling... Orchid dancing in the light Weightless being takes flight Tomorrow is still coming I'm still ..constantly falling.. The Moon still sways in the night He calls out to the stars, "Where is my love? The Sun never waits for me." Weeping bitter sighs "Take me back home, but I never, I never feel fright." Milky way still shines Crystal still chimes Babies still cry World goes around All your life I'm still falling... Just another night I'm still falling... No end in sight
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Hey Jaclyn. I have to say this is a lovely piece of writing. Yeah, I really enjoyed it! Well, I hope I get to hear more from you!

-Sam
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Hey I like the poem alot. It feels as if maybe I really understand what you were thinking. Bravo
*wipes away the tears* omg jac, that was so beatiful, that or I'm a sap.
That was... wow... really good.
Reminds me a lot of me too... a bit. Yah anyways, that was good. Good job. Now write me a song =p....
ttul
love yas *hugs*
~~~~Sarah
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