Ok, now me getting upset. It's a day later but I'm still a little bitchy. I hate it when people write one paragraph in a blog and people call it writing. I think it takes more than a few sentences to be able to contain anything close to artistic, anything worth merit. Maybe, just maybe, it could be a basis for something larger, but when someone complements them on their talent, it upsets me. Write something worthwhile and then I'll call you talented. If you want to be a writer, a songwriter, or anything of the sort why waste your talents on a myspace bulletin or blog? The thought of it drives me to insanity.
I'll say that Michael is a lot better then Peter though ahahaha. Michael at least puts any sort of depth into his paragraphs.
What got me the most, was when people thought Peter's was well written. Throwing a a few servings of the F-Bomb doesn't make a "story" any more serious, any more intense, or any more dramatic. Out of twenty three sentences, if those stubbs can be considered sentences, "fuck" is dropped five times, nearing the end specifically. Is it supposed to build up to something?
It's like a fifth grader writing a rap song.
I'm sorry if I offended you, if you read this, but step your game up.
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