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Poems

by brokenwords on January 2nd 2005, 12:00AM

Feeling: forgotten

#1 Life will get easier, the pain will soon pass, don't worry, keep your chin up! it sounds so perfect, makes me believe you are right, doubt that you're wrong how do i know you're not lying, like everyone in my past what is the difference, what has changed? am i just not adapted to your game? can i trust the look in your eyes? can i trust the beauty of your smile? or do you speak broken words? why would you lie? do you like to see me cry? i would never think of you to be that type of guy but honestly, what do i know? can i believe everything you say, everything you show? #2 i never know whats up with you i cant ever tell when you speak the truth so complex, hard to follow like a maze i dont knows whats next relationship changes day to day, i am never quite sure what to say one day everything is fine, really good friends then the next day the relationship seems to bend, i cant seem to figure it out really happy or very sad i cannot find a steady place in the middle i am so confused within myself, why did i think i could understand you are we friends or are we not? dont ask me, i dont know should i lose all faith and let it go? #3 eyeliner and mascara, once made beauty now runs down her face made with pain and tears while in her heart she knows that nobody cares do you even notice it is there? can you see the fear in her eyes, do you even notice when she cries? wipes away the tears and makeup, as well as dreams why cant it remove the pain? she puts more make up on replaces what was gone so you dont notice she sighs an ok, when she really isnt do you notice or care its a lie? soon she starts to cry, you are so unaware of what is in front of you can you see the make up this time? will you be excepting of another lie? can you honestly care that she is there crying... when inside she feels like dying? #4 i dont want to live a split personality! you love her, CONGRATULATIONS...so happy for you. thats all you hear, but is that really what i feel? do you know what i really think... I HATE IT! I DONT WANT TO KNOW... but would you know thats what i have to say? when i laugh...do you know that is my cry? i guess i must be strong, this whole situation is not wrong. what would you say if i were to cry? could i do the usual? just cover it all with a lie! do you believe me when i say its ok? do you believe me when i speak empty words? blind to the true meaning... yet you dont care. great life for you, while i sit alone... wishing i wasnt there! does this really seem fair? #5 broken to pieces, it fell so quickly, so painfully. shattered image on the floor, my broken heart shall not love anymore. nobody heard the silent screams, nobody tried to save my shattered dreams. when you see my tears, are you just going to say its ok? its not ok, not anymore. did you happen to see the mess on the floor? do you see the pain in my stare? this thing called love isnt fair. broken heart in a pile, like a pile of dust from the pain... so broken, unfixable... without my heart, how can i still care? why do i still want you there? feeling so hollow, so empty can you see what you did to me? tears fall as i look at the whole mess, this was one thing i could have never guessed. just sweep it all up, broken heart, lost and shattered dreams! good-bye to it all! let me know what you think if you will

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[Anonymous]

lol. wow that really made me feel better. but dumb ppl r fun 2 talk 2. cuz they say funny stuff. :P and im not sayin ur dumb. even though it does sound like it...lol. :D

thanks.
life does suck. &so does love.
i hope you feel better. i really do. you deserve to be happy. you don`t deserve all this shit.

my day wasnt so bad either :)

long and boring...but im happy i acually went to school.
i woulda felt like a dumbass if i went 2morrow :)

no no no. i didnt say u sound dumb. lol. and im sry but no. duct tape cant fix a broken heart. only time can fix that. duct tape cant fix everything u no. :P

yea i no. duct tape is a lot easier then time. u have a good point there. lol. and time isnt that long. it's only as long as u make it. :P

ey.. whats the code for putting pictures in the entries?

yea i no. that ouwld b a lot easier. but patience is a virtue. even though i have no idea wat that means....but it sounded good didnt it? lol

yes duct tape can fix that! if you make a duct tape person and you fall in love! there you go!

lata

hey this really has nothing to do about thepoems,however they are great. but i dont knowhow to work this very well and i was wondering if u can help me add pictures to my diary

how does he not no he broke ur heart? and i dont think wat he said would really work. lol. u can always try though. :P o and wat does oi veiy mean or watever?

k im sorry, i dont quite get what u said lol um.. hmm idonno what to say.. cuz it says to put the name of the picture u want in the little box but when i do that nothing shows up

oooo ok. i get it. well he doesnt no u love him do u? if not then it makes no sense 2 b heartbroken. cuz he doesnt no how u feel yet and he hasnt

really done anything. i had 2 use 2 pages. lol. :P

o sry i wasnt signed in. those last 2 comments were from me.

xxxAPExxx

whats AIM?? i dont think so..?

lol. yea i guess ur right. and now i no that i am not alone. :D

sweet_strawberry9

Where do you get your pics?

I'm nothing...Kari

[karigurl13]

okay i added you

really...thats goood...i hope things keep looking up 4 u:)

oooo ok. and yea that would b kind of akward if u just went up 2 some1 and told them u loved them. i wouldnt just b like ok. lol

aww thank you.... i could do A LOT better though....
yeah... we couldnt really talk then cause i had my notebook in my mouth!! haha good stuff.....lata

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[subtlechaos]

lol. yea u r. :P

np. :P wow it seems like u always on. lol. im on most of the time too but not lately cuz im workin on my forum thing. im busy designing it. :D

BRAVO...ENCORE.....their beautiful. your truly talented :)

oooo ok. i just usually get on cuz im bored. lol. and im about 2 get off too.

awww. thas perfect. thas soo cool to hear.

well uhhh today for me was uMm crazy-ish. i got detention 4 next monday and 2 days of OSS for missin school 2 much so that like BLoWs...
but well in my webdesign class like im never there but some1 sent me the work so i would have it done and i asked my teacher to check it & shes all like justine u expect me to believe u got this all done in just the days u were hear? im like yea...

shes like im not givin u any credit for it...some1 had to have done it for u...im like nO no (and im like the worst lier) i had some of it done but i never showed u...and all this stuff BLaH bLaH BlaH...& the kid sit next to and the kid that sent to me we're like backin me up sayinn nNoO no she did i watched her this whole time..& they were makin up all this BS like i been goin thru some hard times and my aunt slipped and fell on ice and is...

...now in the hospital so im really sad about it and stuff. omG and then my teacher is like justine is this true? if u want u can talk 2 me after class....and im like yea uhhh and busted out laughin and yea it was really funny the stuff they were sayin...BUT luckily like right when she asked to talk to me i got called down to the office it was pretty sa-weeet :)

...lol and i kno that was like pointless and u prolly didnt really wanna hear it lol but i juss had to tell some1
it was soo funny :)

welll hope ur day was good now.

ok good?!? :P

wow. nice poem. u can write good. and im sry that ur ot having a good day today. hope it gets better. :D

i like your background! its a pretty colour!
.lauren.elizabeth.

cool! ill check them out!
.lauren.

WoW! I like ur poems I write poems when im depressed...what u so sad about?

awwww...yea i kno how u feel every guy ive ever liked never liked me back :( Thats why i like more then one guy at a timee. Even if u like one more then the other, u have to keep ur options open! And slowly ur feelings 4 that guy u love will go away! cuz u will love other guys :) just a theory! see if it works, it did 4 me:)

yea np. well if he broke ur heart dont u think that u shouldnt care about him anymore? u cant let 1 inncident rule ur life. just try 2 move on u no? otherwise it would never get better. and that wouldnt b good. :P

yea...But u said ur were starting to get over him. So that means it is possible...there has to be things that u dont like about him no guy is perfect...or even close to perfect lol is he shallow...are u like just attracted to him? or u like his personality 2??

soo what made u notice him in the 1st place his looks....But if u think of him as perfect then it cant be just personality that u like and stuff...And his gf what does she look like...i mean im not saying all really pretty girls have no personality but guys like girls 4 the was they look even if they say their not shallow trust me they are!! i talk to alot of guys and i mean i cant believe some of the stuff that comes out of their mouths...

...And the guy u like he could act comepletly different around u then he does around other ppl...To try to make himself seem as tho he is such a nice guy...But im sure around his guy friends and stuff he acts different...u need to find out how he really is every guy has 2 sides to them!

i didnt mean he pretends there is always 2sides to a guy! and if he makes u cryy..then what does that say about his personality...If he makes u cry then the best thing to do is to try and like some1 else i dont mean that u have to suddenly stop likin the other guy cuz that obviously isnt possible. But dont only like him...Talk to more guys and eventually u will get over the guy u like. I kno this will work bcuz i went thru almost the exact thing

yea i guess ur right. everything is always easier said then done. well i hope u start 2 feel better soon then.

lol. yea thnx. :D

yea. could i add u 2 my friends list thing?

o ok. i wuz just makin sure. :P and yea u can add me 2.

But thats how u get over him and u can still be friends u will just be a happier person...u cant be stuck on loving himm if u kno that nothing can happen between u 2. Talking to other guys will get ur mind of of him. Just try it and tell me how it workss out...and im here if u need advice on nething else.

lol. np. i take it that ur not an a good mood then? or not having a good day?

no problem netime..be sure to tell me how it turns out...i have alot of plans in me lol

I'm in love with the 5th one! Damn girl, you are good...

I'm nothing...Kari

i dont wanna go to school either.
but maybe goin to school will acually make u feel better.

everytime i say i dont wanna go
and i acually do go
i end up havin a good day.
so i dunno
maybe thas how 2morrow is gonna be for u

Trust me she wont do it, if she hasn't done it yet she wont do it at all, i know i've been there

[joe]

did u already take off the music?

ehh well its all good.
i listened to it now lol

lol. yea GOOD! :P

i like all of them, but especially the fourth one.

[glambastard]

oh i acually know those songs.
isnt that really old?

yea old but good i agree :)

really it went good?
details plz....

awwww. thas sooo cute and good to hear lol.
yea i think thas what u needed...some time off...but now u*ll be all good.

i knew u would be all good :)

dont b pathetic jlo SUCKS!!!1

[deathislife]

wow. thas soo good.
its about dayum time lol j/k
really tho thas good to hear.

YES I NO IT IS. EVEN THOUGH I DIDNT NO THAT THERE COULD B A "DOUBLE GOOD." BUT IT'S OK. CUZ I DONT NO A LOT OF STUFF. LOL. :P