Rain

Walking in the rain the drops masking my tears; Tears of lonely insecurity. Soaked to the skin wet through and through though no one sees the pain The tears of hurt and betrayal. The pain is all I have from you a reminder of your carelessness and through the veil of tears and raindrops I see your face again. Battling the tears and pain, fighting off your memory, trying to forget the way I felt When you used to love me and used to love walking beside me in the rain.
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make it move u mean ?


<3Trish
entry goez here

thtz the link u put it in ur entry titel when u want it there

tell me if u need help lol

<3Trish
your poetry is good, not gonna lie lol, graphic at times, but good
you go to new entry and where you pu the title in u put tht and where in the link it has text goes here or w.e thtz where u put the name of it then you submit it when ur done wit every thing it should work...

<3Trish
wow. ummm... there's no rain where we are, in case you haven't noticed
-KJ
[Anonymous]
omg, i was JOKING. It was a joke. I knew it wasn't just about rain, i'm not THAT stupid. I thought I'd try to make you laugh. You're way to tense lately
[Anonymous]
ok then srry tho


<3Trish
Nice.
That's awesome. That's all I have to say.