the bright side of the mirror

Didn’t wake up, she was dead, she drowned in a sea of tears, she choked in her own bed. If she was alive, maybe she would understand, why I cry at night, why I fade away... She died on a rainy day, while her so tighten hands tried to push the fears away, but the raindrops shattered her screams, no one heard her beg to stay, she still surmounts my heart, though I don’t feel her here... we are now so far apart, but I see her everyday... the gloomy look in her eyes makes me miserable, sad... but sometimes, really late at night, when the dim sky brings my nightmares home, and my tears remind me everything’s not alright, there’s a sparkle in her eyes that makes it so hard for me to die... yet even harder for me to stay... I always wonder why, They stabbed her that night to death so deep inside, Where no one could help here heal, Not even me, her darkest side.
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its great! I love the ending when the reader finds out that it was the old you that died away! Do you really? feel that way about the old you?
Nah the messiness doenst matter its really good! Well i gotta go, ill talk to you later.
that is really good.
Yea im with u on the short thing also..im 5'0 exact.. I hate it so much.but im tired of it..im tired of boys not looking at me..cause all they can see is FAT ROLES!! hehe well im goin to work at this and make it work..much luck to u
maggie
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i like ur poems
Thank you so much for ur comment..i have a feelin ur a wicked cool person! Hope to hear from you again
much love and peace
maggie
[Anonymous]
Hehe thanks for the stuid 12 am comment! Paper balls that explode? what is this you speak of?
wicked haha thanks for the instructions cant wait to try it out.
k sure thing see ya Brenda!
sry in ur pref. put it under header info

nygirl
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