A Knight's Oath

Feeling: accomplished
Wrote ths today off the top if my head. I know it sucks big time but I just wanted to put it here because I know it'll never get to the intended individual... _____________________________ I want to protect you, for now until the end. From all of lifes little pains it always seems to send. I'll save you from the Dragons, from the towers and the foe. I'd ride across the earth my luve no moutnain high or low could keep me away from you, and this is very true: I'd walk across the seas my dear just to rescue you. _____________________________ Wow, I can't believe I just put that up there. Well, knock yourselves out with the criticism: at this point I don't think you could tell me something I didn't already know. Truly, -Captain B. Poet
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Captain, I'm known for my critisisums and bluntness in the world of lit. and I have to say this is quite good for someone without much expirience. On a more personal note, give it to your girl, I know she'll appreciate it.

-B
[Anonymous]
Captain, I've attempted poetry at times, and I have to say that was beautifully written. Poetry is such a great way to jsut get everything out, kinda challenging too, in finding words that rhyme and sound good.
But like Beacky said, show her the poem, or give it to her. She'll really love it.
Good luck with all of this Captain.
--Kayla
just wanted to say, i DID write. check it out. ttyl.
*gINA
[Anonymous]
Hmm that's sweet and simple =). I wish I could write. All my poems turn out all incredibly asinine and emo.
~Corrina
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