ok, this is why i dont like writing love poems, i try to hard, and they end up sounding sappy. but here is the one i just wrote: Goodbye Kiss: to look into your eyes is to be surprised for i will never know wherever you will go in your mind in your heart if we were far apart what would i do if i were without you to love and to lose is the way i would choose if it could be one last kiss for you and me i long for your touch i miss you so much that as i lay to cry i also lay to die and in this bliss a goodbye kiss from me to you forever my doom