The Castle Arroyo: Part II

Today the hour was long as we labored ourselves and oft' danced to a song-- you can't work without a little humor. The walls at the Castle continue to be overrun by thorny vines that cling and strangle. The lives it divides so easily tangle. I myself have been sentenced estrange. The Queen, it seems, has lost fodness for my er- Sheep. A Wolf, she now sees, and a strumpet is me. Ah, but I sigh, smile and say, 'tis the end of the circus, the secret charade, the end of our hiding, no more masquerade. But this day, I must say, we labored like slaves. Ah, but I smile and announce for the first, Alas I'm fulfilled of my home-craving thirst. Like soldiers of war we raged through our terf, opening and shifting, moving and cleaning, sorting and placing, bending and aching. But you heard not a moan nor whimper of pain as we opened up treasures and moved into our own. Space! Distance! Independence, Oh, Queen! Have our Rabbit, scorn my Sheep, The roof is not yours from below I do sleep. The Lady and me are seeing the light. And that, Oh, Queen, Makes this one sweet good-night.
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story or poem?
either way, good
Glad you liked it. Its one of my fav things ive written. Penned it out in the passenger seat of a car on a notepad. I should carry one with me more often.

I like the Castle story. Youve got such great storytelling skills. You want mythical, you make mythical. Not to mention the assumption this large castle is inspired by the cavernouse house you now live in.

.Steve
by the way I meant to say "assumption".

you know, to be sarcastic.